The piece of my choice

I chose this piece because we had to take an average story and spice it up a bit with some creative words. Being creative with words is something I really enjoy doing there is just something about taking a story that is boring and making I come alive that gets me excited. That’s why I believe this was one of my better assignments in this class because this style of writing is one I am so passionate about, and it made this particular piece of writing stronger than others I have done before. Here is a little part of my story to show you what I mean. “ Janet hammered on the door, and moments later, it opened to reveal the vulgar looking scientist, with a face like a chopped up piece of meat. Brad and Janet stole a glance at each other and then Janet woke up from her dream screaming, sweat dripping of her face.” With this assignment I thought I did a good job painting a picture in the readers head, and especially in the part you guys just read I felt that it was the part of the story I was able to describe more vividly than any other part of the story. Anyway this type of creative writing is the kind that I love, and I hope that I will be able to write more of it in the future.